All Comments on 'Girl Industries'

Good luck in the contest.

I don't know how to rate this. I think it's basically well written, but doesn't match my kink preferences. I don't mind corruption arcs, but don't understand the erotic appeal of mind control. Not judging. Just not my thing.

I don't want to unfairly punish a score with my personal prejudices, and I don't understand the kink well enough to rate it on its own terms. I'm going to pass on voting for those reasons.

But I wanted to leave a supportive comment because the piece seems well done for what it is. I just don't know how to treat it fairly. Nothing personal against the author, and I hope it does well with its intended audience.

Best, Pure