by MisterretsiM
Really? You had to ruin a great love story by giving her the world's biggest cock?
I thought the series was great ..... right up until you added the ridiculously large cock.... disappointing
I knew I was gonna get a stupid ass comment like this when I noticed this series was breaking out of my usual reader-base.
The story has literally been tagged with "hyper cock" and "cum inflation" since the first chapter, and there's been a note about the fetishes you'd find in the series at the beginning of each chapter as well, before a dick even made an appearance. If you're surprised and disappointed, that's on you for lacking any kind of reading comprehension. All it took was a quick check to know what the story was going to contain, but you didn't do that. You decided to complain about the obvious, instead, and waste both of our times. Congrats.
*be typical Literotica Reader*
*completely ignore tags and content warnings*
*Complain when story contains tagged content*
All in all, its well written, the plot is fine and seems like a nice romantic story, the sex scenes are great, the only thing that doesnt sit right with me is the physically impossible phallus, as I feel it just makes the story less realistic and kinda breaks the immersion in the story. Honestly, I feel like you could have given her a huge, but believable dick (10-12 inches) and achieved the same effect. But its still a great story, hope you continue it.
Oh my gods
I cannot WAIT to read about her pegging him
Man's gonna turn into a damn balloon
Also I'm so glad you actually mentioned her p-spot. It takes a rather long toy to reach mine unfortunately, but *gods* does it feel heavenly
This series is the best story I've ever read on Literotica. I even stopped jerking off while reading it just so I could read it better. It's a beautiful love story. You get a 10/10. Hell this is the first comment I've ever left ok a story and probably the only one I ever will.