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All Comments on 'Girls Day'

by BakedBaker420

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The spelling errors, tense errors, inconsistent capitalization etc distracted me so much I couldn’t enjoy the story

ShySheriShySheri11 months ago

Might have been ok but needs a good editor to read this through.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Nice story, but gad, please learn how to spell and keep the verb tense consistent!

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