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Click hereYour phone was blowing up with notifications for hours, and when you got in the car to drive home that night you sat in the parking lot furiously rubbing your pussy while you looked at the photos and watched the videos that filled your text messages and you came again and again until the car seat was slick with the wetness flowing from your poor pussy.
- COMMENTS
Wifetheif7 months agoSecond-person only works in situations that call for it such as, "Jill you were so drunk last night that you turned into a skank! You let this creepy guy expose your bra, and later you banged him!" It does not work in the place of first person or omniscient.
thecarolinadreamer7 months agoOnce again you have proven 2nd person just don't work well with a short story.
Anonymous8 months agoWhat's with the second person narrative? Horrible. The story wasn't any better either of course. Pretty lame, seems to be typical with this writer...
Anonymous8 months agoHonestly I really liked it. Not for the poor schmuck husband of the wife in question, but rather for the story itself, and the erotica of it. After all isn't that what this site was founded on. Or maybe this story should have been put in the non consent forum? Especially since that's where all the good stories have migrated to. Thanks for sharing it.
tralan69er8 months agosecond person POV really sucks. Try it again with a different POV.
NO READ NO SCORE
The_John_Yossarian8 months agoDamn, OP, are you trying to single-handedly revive the bad habit of second-person writing? This was a thing back in the 90s, but it's an awful style that alienates the reader. I mean, who cares what some lothario is writing to some chick? Is this a guy who refers to himself in the third person and names his private parts after himself prefaced by the adjective, "little?" Probably drives a Trans-Am with speed-taped T-top panels and primer grey junkyard fenders. Try reviving payphones or hot rollers, both of which have an actual purpose in the universe.
Anonymous8 months agoNothing about this story makes for an entertaining read. Married? Thinks her husband will love a conversation replay? No indication sh and her girlfriend actions mean what? As I bounce from one recommended story to another it is my fault I am disappointed. Each one has less direction and more dribbling out nonsense to no end. Please stick to reading and not writing...
Anonymous8 months agoWhy do so many authors stop their stories in the middle of a possible better story. I mean, after all, is that really where you wanted this to stop?
bobareeno8 months agoWriting in the present tense is almost always a mistake. Especially in the first person.
