All Comments on 'Give and Take'

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ninalee312ninalee312over 14 years ago
interesting challenge

While I'm not a big fan of the male character's personality in this story, all the descriptions related to the thoughts, feelings and sheer physical aspects of sex between the two characters are just right on. Totally right on. Keep on writing.

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