All Comments on 'Giving'

Disappointing. I was looking for more, something tender and loving, not a competition about sex. Sorry, couldn't get past the first page.

Similar feelings as comment belong, it’s the over exaggeration and repetitive description of events. For instance, you say “Ky I really like you. No I really really like you but no Ky I don’t think you understand I really really really like you.” You don’t have to over embellish the obvious. You two were smitten with each other and you had sex. Ok, we get it so this could be an awesome opportunity for you to edit and repost your experience cause as is it’s a struggle to give a positive vote.

This was a beautiful, passion filled reading. A lovely well written journey through a few days of your lives. Thank you for sharing this part of your love story.