All Comments on 'Glow'

by CleoSultra

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SisterJezabelSisterJezabelabout 4 years ago

What an interesting start! Not the usual fare I find in the romance section, but I enjoyed rading something different! Keep it coming :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Huh?

Help me understand this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Good start 😊

CleoSultraCleoSultraabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you for feedback

Hello to everyone who has taken time to read this submission.

This is the first story I have ever written and I know there is a lot of improvement required, lol. I know this ends abruptly but I am working on a continuation which will be done and submitted soon, for those who enjoy this type of writing.

Stay safe and much love to you all. <3

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years ago

Please begin a new paragraph for every time a different speaker starts. It is too difficult to follow if bunched together in a single paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I love Magick and if it involves love even better.

I love Magick and if it involves love even better. Please continue the story. Hmu for the next chapter. Hmu once the next chapter is done

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