All Comments on 'God's Design Ch. 02'

by Banjosack

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Shit

This is fuckig ass. Learn to write something good you slut

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great

nice story dont let anyone tell you its not cant wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great start

Please continue your story. Is really like to see where it goes.

BanjosackBanjosackover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Hey everyone thanks for the support, despite what that one person said this chapter is rated higher than my first, so I'll assume it's at least popular with some people. Writing chapter 3 right now, I will warn people who came in just to read a sissy story, whilst that is what it will mostly be, it wont just be sissy sex.

And to that one guy that called me a slut, I don't know if you genuinely hated my chapter and wanted me to feel bad, or if you were just trying to go along with the theme. Either way you should know I like being called a slut so it didn't upset me. Thanks xx

BambifemboiBambifemboiover 6 years ago
More please

Pretty please don't stop this story! It's so amazing!

BanjosackBanjosackover 6 years agoAuthor
Some issues

So I've been trying to upload chapter 3, but it's been rejected twice due to spelling errors? I checked it both times and the only errors were those done on purpose in the dialogue, so I've changed them, so it won't be as emotive, but hopefully will actually be accepted this time.

JeJeServamp17JeJeServamp17about 6 years ago
awesome chapter.

I don't know if you even know what an isekai is but that is exactly what you have written and I love it.

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