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here4heelshere4heelsover 1 year ago

It looks like parts of the story got copied again to the bottom.

passedmybestpassedmybestover 1 year agoAuthor

Think I must have copied and pasted twice maybe ? Something definitely went wrong

jonburnejonburneover 1 year ago

For a first time author, hell, even for an experienced author the three " Good Girl Becomes Hot Woman" stories are very good. More please!

Wiz1002Wiz1002over 1 year ago

I like the story, but it was a schoolgirl error to paste in the half the story twice!

passedmybestpassedmybestover 1 year agoAuthor

Wiz1002,

Pleased that you enjoyed the story. Totally agree 100% about the paste mistake, will learn from my mistakes.

Thanks for the comment.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

We need more passedmybest 😜😜😜 The paste error does not take from it . Bev sounds really hot and naughty 😉 Can not wait for next chapter 👍👍👍

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Duplicate section is at the end of the last section..spoils the ending

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