by lexierincarle
The tender and the rough go together so nicely, and remembered pain adds an understated bit of spice. Keep writing.
One thing I would say, though is that being woken up first thing in the morning in that oral fashion might be a little uncomfortable, I know I would usually need to urinate after waking up and well coming with a full bladder likely would cause certain problems
Happy subbies are hot subbies! A great first submission, and welcome to Lit. I only hope this story is autobiographical. Five stars, and waiting for more!
Loved the dynamics between the two characters, it seemed very real :) can't wait to see more from you!
Thankyou all so much for your comments, they mean a lot! Hopefully you'll be hearing more from these two characters over Christmas :)