All Comments on 'Good Morning, Pet'

by lexierincarle

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Serafina1210Serafina1210over 9 years ago
Lovely first story

The tender and the rough go together so nicely, and remembered pain adds an understated bit of spice. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Well done, good girl.

Foxwood20Foxwood20over 9 years ago
Well done

Good use of language, and a fairly believable scenario

Foxwood20Foxwood20over 9 years ago
waking up

One thing I would say, though is that being woken up first thing in the morning in that oral fashion might be a little uncomfortable, I know I would usually need to urinate after waking up and well coming with a full bladder likely would cause certain problems

ham_sandwichham_sandwichover 9 years ago
Delightful!

Happy subbies are hot subbies! A great first submission, and welcome to Lit. I only hope this story is autobiographical. Five stars, and waiting for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing!

Loved the dynamics between the two characters, it seemed very real :) can't wait to see more from you!

lexierincarlelexierincarleover 9 years agoAuthor
Thankyou!

Thankyou all so much for your comments, they mean a lot! Hopefully you'll be hearing more from these two characters over Christmas :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
:)

Awesomeness to a T!! Great work.... PLEASE keep writing!

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