All Comments on 'Good Slave Employee'

Wow no substance, no descriptive language. No Creative writing skills at all. Super short.

"my employer" and "your employer" over and over and over again? How about 'boss' just to break up the monotony. The least believable dialogue I've seen in a while, and that's saying a lot on a site where 'trite conversations' are the default.

I hoped for a little more. Really wanna see what she becomes. Maybe a sequel?