All Comments on 'Got Lucky and I’m Not Dead (2022)'

This is distracting, nothing a good editor couldn't fix. Otherwise good

Great story. Parts were a little hard to follow at first, but would love to read more. Thanks

I enjoyed it for a quick read. Would loved to have enjoyed my own mom when she was younger. Somewhere between 40-60. Also would love to hear more about the dad running off with your mom's sister. I have a crush on my wife's sister as well.

Don't bother with Part 2

This was hard to read in all honesty. You jumped around several times and told it from different perspectives that didn’t make sense.

Great story. Waiting for part 2.

You need an editor very badly. You should not submit anything else until you get one.

hard to follow

The person view keeps changing. I gave it a 3

A solid 2.