All Comments on 'Gothic Girl'

Good story idea, but I was extremely distracted by spelling errors and misused words. Great potential here, but a little bit stiff (hah) in the dialogue. I suggest an editor.

I'm sorry, but this was painful to read. It had potential, but was so stiff & unnatural I felt like I was being dragged from one paragraph to the next. I strongly suggest you find an editor.

I wanted to give the story a 5, but could only give it a 3 because of the poor spelling,and the lack of continuity, were her eyes hazel, or blue? With an editor this could be a great series...

goth chix!!!!!!!!!!! hell yeah. lovely read.

good story, great plot, could use a rewrite to fix the few mistakes, definatly needs a part two and three.

hope you write more soon

"trophies or medals he would of won"

Would've or would have.