by Krazy_Organized_Chaos
Well done with the 750 Word challenge. One tip, use more contractions.
This is actually something I see in my own first drafts of normal length stories; not using contractions when they'd be more natural in the characters' dialogue. It's one reason I always read my stories out loud as part of my editing.
In this project, they can give you a few extra words to play with.
Ok, he will be here he’ll
I am in the adjoining I’m
I will be right over. I’ll
that I spent too much time I’d
I noticed that recognizing the ink stain didn't make her freak from embarrassment, wondering if the professor also recognized her, but instead made her think about her next session.
Will this short intro be followed by a longer story where she comes to terms with how much she enjoys sucking cock, so why not get paid for it? :-)
Anonymous, that was kinda the point. It was for the 750 word contest :)