All Comments on 'Grandpa D and His Grandsons Ch. 01'

REALLY looking forward to seeing where this goes! Got my blood pumping!

Damn. More please. You left me hanging and hard

Initially, I thought this might belong in the gay section. Perhaps subsequent 'chapters'! Will clarify that.

I do hope they vernacular is to emphasize the ruralness, is that a word, of the family. Otherwise there are lots of grammatical slips and punctuation that I see as errors. Perhaps these are more attributable to your Intended speach patterns; hard to tell.

As per my usual, Proof Reading is required; perhaps an editor too.

However, you have set the stage and established your settings. Let's see where you might take us, it could be most interesting.

I'm just a country man. SORRY about the grammar or any errors. That's just how we talk on the ranch.

I've submitted Chs 2, 3, 4, and 5.

I hope they are approved.

I have read some stories that has to ne worse grammar than mine, or so I think! Please keep reading if they get approved! Thank you!

It's only going to get more gross, I promise

Loved it! ❤️

I like how you describe the figures of your protagonists. Just the grandpa seems to take it too well? Did he have similar sessions when he was Tyler's age?

Awesome! I saw the part 5 or whatever it was, and clicked on your name so I could start with part 1... the title, and the idea of incest was intriguing! And, proved well worth it!

Reading the next few!

@FreakSlave, I am not sure how you could see the part 5. I mean, It emerged after you posted the comment.

Thank you all. The story will continue to unfold.

I intend to describe the summer just as it happened. I felt the need to describe our family and our setting. No, we aren't your typical family ... even before this started, we were not typical... I am a Rancher. I have a degree in Agricultural Science, not English Literature, so please bear with me. I am learning this computer set up, and I haven't ask anyone for help, so yes, I may be raw. I just wanted to share my story. Some names have changed, but that is all. If you see an error, please Remember I am learning. Thank you. I hope you enjoy reading about us. I enjoy telling it.

Such a hot way to learn one’s true nature…such a great story…It’s like I can feel that I definitely know exactly what I need too…Going to read every single one… Thanks so much..

Hi there, just finished part one and looking forward to reading more. Many things passed in my mind reading this so far like wishing I had a grandpa like you when I was growing up. Keep up ( I know I will be ) the great story.

Not every story is for everyone.

If it isn't for you, just pass on by!

Or....

Continue to read and don't be so quick to pass judgements.... Ch. 2 is pending.