by 69Rancher
Descriptive but poorly written. Nothing intense about how this story presents lays itself out. It is just a description of events that actually sound somewhat real. 3 rating.
Hi anon, every story has its ups and lows. Just be patient and don't act prematurely.
Not every story is for everyone.
If it isn't for you, just pass on by.
Or... wait for Ch 2 and continue reading.
Don't be so quick to pass judgement.
Unless, of course, you are perfect!
Also...
Maybe you should read ..
GRANDPA D AND HIS GRANDSONS from Ch. 1 on....