All Comments on 'Grapes O' Wrath Ch. 02'

Now for Ramos & Deedee to discuss some things....

Also brutal, hot n' sex laden; almost humorous in some ways as if you might have been having a bit of fun with parody of the stroke genre; thinking of some of the more florid passages. None of the foregoing meant as criticim in the least. You've carved out a unique niche for yourself; managed to make the janitor a sympathetic character despite his near-rape of the bitch queen whom you effectively painted with just a few sentences. Of course it's far fetched but ain't life sometimes. Please keep writing. You're doing a first-rate job.

Literotica's John Steinbeck would havbe been proud as Hell! Maybe next time We'll go back to Tobacco Rd, where I'm sure you'll find lots of SEX, Slavery and sedition to write home to your regular Fans about?