by GeneratorD
Whilst this was well written, it seems too nice. There wasn’t any emotion shown by “John”, who has not experienced swapping before. It would be expected that he would, at some point, have moments of jealousy or angst about the fact that his wife was experiencing wonderful sex with another man. It would have had made a better story and introduced actual real life feelings.
Hot!!! Damn well written, and your pace is nice, flowing, unhurried... no rushing it because, well, it... "ruins the flavor!" 5/5!
Well written, but really felt flat. Didnt strike me as having any real depth beyond a bunch of suck and fuck writing. If that was the goal, good on ya!
I had a hunch from part one, that Dani and Claire would enjoy each other's pussy...….and then some.