All Comments on 'Greatly Appreciated'

Very intriguing, the pacing and then changing up but it all seemed important after I read it the second time. This character group could go a few more single page chapters/installments.

BRAVO!!

Good work, but use an editor. Boo boos take the reader out of the story. Only small errors, though. Maybe a little too many characters - I was a little confused. Real sexy, especially when he gets home.