All Comments on 'Growth and Lust Ch. 03 - Cold'

by jakenotjacob

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SorchakSorchakabout 2 years ago

If you could spell properly, you would get a better score, especially with words that shouldn't be hard to get right. For example, there is only ONE way to properly spell 'frame', and you got it wrong. Fraim was a word at one time, a few hundred years ago, and it meant alien or strange. So no points for that.

DukaagDukaag28 days ago

^^^homie thinks he's judging a contest piece! You sound pretentious AS FUCK! This dude (assuming based off name) writes better than most people on this site. Imo if this guy doesn't already write non-sexual stories professionally, he should!

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