by TiberiusPrime
Love this series. Brightens my day every time I see you published another chapter. I wish the chapters were a little bit longer but thats just mainly because I'm impatient and love this story and am eager to see it in all it's completed glory. Hopefully that's at least another 20 chapters or more because I love this world you have built.
Very yummy and a lot of fun too. I like the adventure and his increasing powers. I'm looking forward to more of your story. Thank you!
PS: Can't wait to see how Detective Ashe gets involved...
This has become a fun read with a few pleasent twists
Really looking forward to reading moreXVYUY
I see this thing with his Dad coming around to his bribing the security company and having a remote hookup to the system. And their private times are being recorded by his Dad. But he has a dream about it all and confronts the security company and gets all the tapes.
it takes away from original core group