All Comments on 'Gym Buddies Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Series started really well. Now it has run out of steam. Seriously needs confrontation with Richard or it's become a yawn fest

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

As good as this series has been, it's starting to feel a bit off. Something just isn't right. IDK where you're going with this story, but if there's not a change in direction for Kels marriage (a divorce) and soon, then I'd venture that you'll lose my interest. Also, bring another female into the story. Should make it a little more interesting. Just suggestions, no demands.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

This started so good, loved the build up over several chapters, but it's gotten boring now that they've been together. There definitely needs to be either a confrontation with the husband or a falling out with Tom and Kel. Without one or both of those things this story has petered out with no reason to continue on. Just remember the good guy doesn't always get the girl. Having said that, I hope the story does continue. But without change or conflict it will be a boring read.

BruceWoBruceWoabout 1 month ago

Can understand the buildup but now Kelli is a two timing bitch as well as a cheat.

Just end the marriage if you are unhappy. At least talk it through

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