All Comments on 'Halfling Ch. 02'

These need to be under the nonhuman category.

There was once a radio play-by-play announcer who had the hardest time pronouncing unusual last names. He once mispronounced a player’s name during a video recording three different ways. I only say that because you spelled Valerie’s name five different and unique ways in this chapter. Did you even bother to proofread it?