All Comments on 'Halloween Hell: Carla and Jeff'

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CreeperclawCreeperclaw8 months ago

Sooner or later someone's gonna open that closet...

Luckily they're both already pretty much outcasts.

Although I wonder how much of this was the spirit's influence and how much is just Jeff taking advantage of a perfect revenge situation? Also if he might as well fuck her in the ass while he's at it?

MasterBlogmanMasterBlogman7 months ago

Really well written. Takes a long time to get anywhere but still hot.

reaper1967reaper19677 months ago

want a part 2 please

cutelilhottiecutelilhottie7 months ago

Usually I like you Halloween themed ones but this one was disappointing

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Had a good start but I wish he’d utilize the spooky haunted room & maybe the drink in the flask.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Hope Rebecca from the first one returns, something about her just makes you want to be cruel

Anton79Anton797 days ago

I searched “Lauren Boebert” and found this gem. Cool story.

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