by Tiny_Miney
Love the new chapter! Really hope the next one comes soon, want to see all three of them together and how big a load Umi will have
This scratches a lot of itches for me. I enjoy both kinds of stories the kind with lots of plot and this kind which is almost pure smut but this is becoming one of my favorites. It's a shame that she can only cum once but many that will change later. I haven't noticed much if any mistakes in writing either. Keep up the great work!
Love this story keep it up cant wait for the next one just hope i dont have to wait 2 mo ths for it
I would like for Umi to conquer the whole school, slowly but surely working her way up the rankings. Maybe Tiny, you could have that girl we got a glimpse of at the end of chapter 4, see what her obsession with Umi is? See, if Umi is going to F Rena and Pup into submission, or if she's going to be gentle with those she cares about you should distinguish that early on, she should show progress throughout this story in those she just wants to F and those she genuinely cares about.
Good smut story, can't wait for you to written more. Umi will need to up her game and learn how to cum more than once if she wants to keep her horny friends happy and drunken on her cock. I hope in future Umi and Whinny will cross their paths (and dicks) sometime soon, also Pup should team-up with another futa with dog dick for a knotted double (mutual?) penetration scene. Anyway thanks for writing this its a really rare to see a story with several different fetishes mix so well.
Good smut story, can't wait for you to written more. Umi will need to up her game and learn how to cum more than once if she wants to keep her horny friends happy and drunken on her cock. I hope in future Umi and Whinny will cross their paths (and dicks) sometime soon, also Pup should team-up with another futa with dog dick for a knotted double (mutual?) penetration scene. Anyway thanks for writing this its a really rare to see a story with several different fetishes mix so well.