by Anarashka
REALLY?? I know there are different degrees of everything in this world. I can't say I got into this story but only because limits I would set for Myself as a Dominant have be leaped over in your story. It was definitely well written because I could visualize everything you wrote about. I can see discipline between a Master and slave but I just can't understand why a Master would purposely do something to disfigure His property. Females are beautiful, yes all of them. The thing that makes them become ugly is their attitudes... or more beautiful when they can show the proper respect. Like I said, just beyond My limits as a Master.
2 stars.
This 'man' is no master, he is a psychotic, sadistic bully. This isn't dominance - it's assault.
I think that this story goes a bit too far, the way that this so called master treats his slave is a bit far fetched. But I think that I feel this way because of the way that my master treats me, he never leaves a permanent mark, and, as far as I'm aware, he wouldn't ever damage me in any way that would physically break flesh. There needs to be a longer sex scene in my opinion, there doesn't seem to be enough detail to fully picture what's happening when she's tied up.