All Comments on 'Happy'

What a beautiful little love story. Thank you for putting a smile on my face this morning.

A very romantic and lovely story. You've made quite the blossoming girl in Jane and a very charming suitor in Alberto. As far as the setup and romance is concerned it's an easy five.

However the story is also completely devoid of any actual erotica. Which is a choice you can make as an author ofc but it may turn away future readers or result in a lesser score. A disclaimer that the story is non-sexual might be a good idea if you take the same road in the future.

Good first story!

5

I love your story. I'm a total sucker for love stories. With or without erotica. Although, happy endings aren't very often real - there are still, stories, books, plays and poems to let us live that out. Thank you and keep up the good work.

A beautifully written romantic story, with enough detail to give it pace and illustrate the love that they have come to have for one another. Thanks.

Such a lovely story. One a transgendercould only dream of. Taking it slow and careful with small steps so loving. You left the door open with the ring.

Okay - I’m still on page 1 and I like this romance, but my skin rankled at a transitioning girl choosing to wear a pantsuit to court. Goddamn it, gurl, get yourself a basic skirt and heels for those court appearances! I won’t push a pussycat bow blouse on you, but PLEASE! Get it together : )