Harem Master - RPG story Ch. 001

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"What's that?" he asked, looking at her with hope.

"Skill upgrades and received additional skills," she said, noticing the look of surprise on his face.

"So, I can upgrade your skills? And give you new ones?"

"It sounds like this. We won't have a problem finding teammates if that's the case. So don't worry, I'll take care of everything. You just need to be yourself and charm those girls," she teased.

He shook his head in disbelief. "I'd never have thought that you'd say something like this."

Elara felt her cheeks blush. "Well, maybe I'm a little bit excited. That I could sleep with another woman, and also, if I find an eager girl, then maybe we could try a threesome."

He smiled sadly. "I still doubt you'll find anyone that'd want to join our team. Even if I can give them new skills, they'd still need to... be intimate with me."

Asher sometimes had trouble with self-confidence, and Elara was worried that this class might be a source of problems for him.

"And you think that anyone would take it as a big flaw? Just check what skills you can upgrade for me and what new skills you can give me. We'll see if we have any problems then." She was counting on the fact that it'd be good, and would help them find someone interested in joining their team.

The potential to upgrade skills, and even give new ones, was something that'd surely make it easier. Sleeping with Asher shouldn't be a big problem, he was handsome and hot, on the contrary, that was probably a benefit for their future teammates.

Asher nodded and closed his eyes, focus evident on his face. Then, he frowned. Suddenly, he opened his eyes wide in shock.

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Thanks for reading! I would love if you leave a comment, because I want to get better, and find out what you like.

P.S. Second chapter is published, and contains our pair exploring more of his new class

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bhojobhojo10 days ago

I don't get why theevilsmurf thinks this is borrowed from dungeons and dalliances as the protagonist there is a futanari . So total change in dynamic. Were you sincere Mr smurf or were you just evil ? And are you Blue dabba dee ? You may think it's the meaning of life but it could just be 6 times 7.

bhojobhojo10 days ago

Interesting premise.

ThunderloverThunderloverabout 2 months ago

Lots of potential here

theevilsmurf42theevilsmurf423 months ago

I know you have multiple chapters, but I am going to comment as I go. It seems fairly obvious to me that english isn't your first language, or if it is perhaps you are on the younger side. Either way while not difficult to read per se, it feels disjointed. The story itself is "borrowed" from Dungeons and Dalliances which in and of itself it fine as long as it's just inspired by and not full on plagerism. You should give a nod to that author in your notes though.

I would highly recommend an editor to help clean up your story a bit.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This story is just bizarrely written. I mean just atrocious grammar. I don't think I've ever seen anything quite like it. I mean between the grammar, the syntax, using incorrect words at times, and the odd habit of repeating ideas over and over it all comes off as so strange. Feels like it was written by a poor AI.

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