Harem Master - RPG story Ch. 003

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Elara kneeled next to Asher and the defeated creature, focusing on its body to check for anything. A black mist rose from the goblin's body, and a small box appeared from it. Elara grabbed and examined it. Made of simple wood without any decorations, it seemed solid. Opening it, she reached inside and grabbed the first item.

She recognized that it was a coin, and when she pulled it out, she noticed that it was a bronze one. It was about one inch in diameter. Elara read on the internet that there were a few types of coins: bronze, silver, gold, and diamond. Each one more valuable, and only obtainable through dungeons.

Explorers could spend them in dungeons, where they could find some sort of shops. She wasn't sure how it worked exactly, but she knew that their value came from it, so they were used as currency outside of a dungeon too, especially popular near dungeon entrances.

Elara had never seen any and brought it closer to her eyes. She noticed that on both sides of it was a face, clearly showing the Goblin. She was curious if all coins worked like this, marked with the head of the monster that dropped it.

Elara hid the coin in her pocket and stuck her hand in the chest again. This time she took out a small vial with red liquid in it. She suspected what it was, but she inspected it anyway to be sure.

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Small health potion - Common

Heals 5 health points

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The box in her hand vanished, turning into white smoke. The same happened to the goblin's body and the sword that it used.

"Nothing amazing," Asher commented, still kneeling by her side.

Elara shrugged. "It was a first level goblin. That's probably standard loot from it." She looked at the potion in her hand and then to her side, but decided that it could be more useful when they are in a dungeon. Maybe they would be in a situation in which they wouldn't have time to heal.

"Can you hold it for a moment?" She handed the flask to Asher. Right now, they didn't have a good way of holding items. When they start exploring dungeons, they will need to get bags. Elara was pretty sure dungeon bags could hold items even if they were bigger than the bag, but she had no idea how that worked.

Asher grabbed the vial and then lifted himself from the ground.

"I think we should return home. We can't risk stumbling into anything else." He pulled her from the ground and looked around them, concerned.

She glanced around too, making sure there wasn't anything close to them. Elara instinctively wanted to leave her daggers at their usual place but hesitated. Without a weapon, she wouldn't have a chance against the Goblin, and they still had some distance to travel back.

She turned towards Asher. "Better to take them with me. If something attacks us again, I will have a weapon."

He looked at his pike and sighed. Then threw it between trees on some of the other weapons that they held there.

"Without you, this fight would be much harder, Ash." Elara looked at him. "I got cut. Not deep, because I dodged. Without your fifteen point boost, I wouldn't be fast enough and could have been wounded much worse."

With concern still on his face, he grabbed her hand. "Let's go." Asher pulled her towards his house.

They didn't talk at all during their way back. Elara was cautious, listening for any sounds, ready if something were to attack them again, but fortunately, they got to his house without any other incidents.

"I think I'll go home. Spend some time with family. We won't see them for some time," Elara said, hugging him. When she left his arms, he wanted to say something, but frowned and looked to the side.

"Hey, what's up?" Elara asked while grabbing his hands.

"I wanted to offer to walk you to your house for safety. But..." he didn't finish. Both of them understood that he was the more vulnerable one.

Elara hugged him. "Thanks. Just for the thought. I appreciate it." She kissed him. "See you tomorrow."

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dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknew7 days ago

With her taking the dominant role, his title should be Harem Bitch instead of Harem Master...

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Sad to say the grammar and syntax took a step back with this one, not as bad as the first, but a step back to be sure.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very interesting story can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Such an interesting idea. Please do more!

Ice_976Ice_9764 months ago

I loved this!! Very excited to read more!!

Trc2003Trc20034 months ago

Hi

I like your idea a lot, and understand not using your native language could be tough

If you accept a rookie editor, please get in touch

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please read more English texts. Pay attention to words that you consider to be not important, like 'a' and 'the' and 'his' and 'her' and 'their': they are important in English.

The dialogue sentence often consists of the dialogue plus the dialogue tag. There is no point between both as it is considered to be one sentence only. Consequently the dialogue tag never starts with a capital letter, unless the first word of the dialogue tag is a name, because names start with a capital letter.

For example: "I'm really fine. Everything was under control." She assured him.

In this dialogue sentence 'She assured him' is the dialogue tag. Since there cannot be a point between the end of the dialogue and the dialogue tag the point after 'control' must be changed into a comma. Consequently 'She' must be written in lower case.

This is the correct dialogu interpunction: "I'm really fine. Everything was under control," she assured him.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great idea and good start with the plot. It's clear that English isn't your first language, and I would strongly recommend finding a good editor to help with grammar, or spend extra time correcting it yourself. The mistakes and missing words distract from the world you are building, which is a shame.

AZslyderAZslyder4 months ago

Passable concept, but please get an editor. The spelling and grammar issues really detract from the reading as it's so jarring. The occasional typo is ok, this is just painful. That said, it's a decent re-design on the cuckquean skill-boost sub-genre...let's see what else you have to add.

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