All Comments on 'Harem Master - RPG story Ch. 004'

I have given five stars, but this only as encouragement. Three stars would be more realistic.

English clearly is not your mother tongue. English requires different linguistic thought patterns. Read more English texts and try to think in English thought patterns, try to think as an English man.

But all in all: I enjoy your story and look forward to the next installment.

Great chapter. The story is still very good and the grammar really improved!

I would advise editing the previous chapters too, so that new readers are not repelled by the style.

Keep up with the good work!

Its really starting to get intresting, keep it up. Loving it

Getting more and more interesting! The interaction between El and Cait is making me wonder if they will be teaming up after all! Looking forward to more @RPG_Master

A very captivating chapter!

Keep up the good work!

I have enjoyed this story in it's entirety! Each chapter improving. Can't wait for the next!

How about getting some virgin shortstack goblins and kobolds to join the harem? Also it would be nice if the dude would later also become a mage. Also it would be nice if the guy had a passive ability to beautify his harem members.

Really enjoying this story. Enough to overlook some of the rough grammar. Keep up the good work!