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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Story tags???????

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Lesbian story, no tags supplied by author

Wrong catagory Lesbian sex

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Page ONE - "After a wonderful evening out at a local dive listing to a local band ..."!

Shouldn't that be "After a wonderful evening out at a local dive listENing to a local band ..."?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

can't spell, limited or broken vocabulary, ... dialogue unfit for even an amateur porn shoot, and improperly posted and tagged. Apparently written by an Incel that never made it passed about the 4th grade or so... 0 to like here.

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April 25 2024 I retired recently so I have more time for this little hobby. Just a guy trying something new. I would love any comments you might have, trying to make the next better than the first. And vote as well!!! I welcome, even encourage comments and suggestions to any...