All Comments on 'Heartbreak and Hope Ch. 04'

Any more part’s coming?

Yes, Patton. Read my bio which has updates on what I am working on. I was stuck on both this and Fixing the past. I'm still stuck on fixing the past but wrote about 2K words literally yesterday on Heartbreak 5 and I actually liked them. I've had several false starts where I got rid of 1K words or so that just sucked.

I'm still reading this instalment but one thing that I'm struggling to get past with this story is this -

People are poverty stricken and homeless. Then a reality TV show comes along and says, "Forget your broke ass wife. We've got all you can eat, clean and functional shelter and a tailor made wife that you must fuck. Oh and by the way, we'll give you a shit ton of money if you decide to stay together." The only catch is (as mentioned above) it's reality TV.

If poverty really was that prevalent then the producers would have riots from everyone trying to get on the show.