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JellyishJellyish4 months ago

Your stories would be much more effective & enjoyable if you or someone could correct all the typos. They are distracting, and in one case (part 3, I think) your story mentions a Tom when the male character is John. Just a thought!

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I have written a variety of material but would welcome collaborations. I do read my comments if you wish to leave them. As Paul McCartney said, " I wanna be a paperback writer'

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