All Comments on 'Helping Hands'

Good premise.

Needed more teasing of cock and balls before masturbating him to his orgasm.

Maybe some conversation about what he fantasized about when he masturbated before his accident.

Perhaps exhibiting their breasts to help him. Perhaps letting him kiss them. Suck them. What did their breasts look like? What were the nipples like? How sensitive were they?

Perhaps changing who was playing with his balls and who was jerking him.

Perhaps some discussion about whether they were jerking too fast? Too slow? Too hard? Not hard enough?

Seemed to be in a rush to end. Too bad.

Four stars.

Brilliant! Keep writing!

amazing. Ill be following your work closely

Very good to have friends. Many girls curious and hold penis for pee.

Great!

That’s hot, and well written. Is there going to be a part 2?

I really hope there’s another installment. Perhaps a titfuck?

Good story! I just don't get how someone can anonymously comment on how you should write the story. If they know what they want in a story, why can't they write it themselves?

Keep up the good work. I loved both stories just as written.

ok would have been beter if a blowjob or lick had somhow been worked in from the pair but ok