All Comments on 'Helping Out Denise'

Not even the thought of homosexual behaviors are erotic for me. Open marriage sickens me and when Dave states he has sucked and been assfucked by John, I stopped reading.

Great story! Jeannie needs to get her own strap on cock & then she & Denise can peg both of the guys.

Good stuff. Keep writing! It's fun to have everyone's consent explicitly included in the story. As someone who practices ENM, it's definitely a plus in my book. There were a few typos. I recommend an editor/proofreader; the Literotica community is available to help!

I appreciate that the whole story took place from one perspective, and allowed is to discover along with the protagonist what's happening next.