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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
No punch line

You have a nice build up, but then no punch line. Bummer!

thomas_deanthomas_deanalmost 4 years ago
Playing Doctor

Every hairdresser learns on friends. Why shouldn't the same be true for nurses? The Boyfriend is submissive almost to the end, but the story fails to come to a firm conclusion, to mix metaphors. Similar stories caspankster's Jimmy's Afternoon as a Test Subject and SampsonBrass' Anatomy Exam do manage to come to a definite conclusion. Still it is an interesting yarn.

bigboy2485bigboy2485over 2 years ago

Enjoyed reading this story, but feel like you forgot to finish it, it ends just as the readers getting in to it.

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Grew up in southern Oklahoma and went to college for civil engineering in upstate New York where I have lived ever since. Had a successful career, but some years ago in my mid-life crisis I quit my job, went back to school for a doctorate and became a college professor. It's...