All Comments on 'Her Ch. 02'

This whole piece reeks of frat brothers and sophomoric hijinks.

Why the category change? Ch 1 was in E&V, you tagged this Exhibitionist and Voyeur, why not leave it there>

Hmmmm

Why post one page chapters???

Yeah, this will happen. However, longer chapters please

Not a LW story. Barely a story at all.

I’m doing my best as a new writer, are you a writer? Are you an editor? Have you published any stories yourself? It takes time and practice just to get published on this website. I’m open to criticism of style, story etc. but These are my first efforts. Short pieces that I’m learning from. If you can do better, please show us.

I'm waiting for the guy to start with a helping hand