by HS98
Interesting premise.
But rushed. Lacking in details. Lacking in teasing.
Two stars.
Hopefully, there's more to this story. How can she be sure he'll be back? Is the small key for more than cuffs? She's pretty confident.
nothing quite as efficient at killing a boner as a femdom story, especially one in which the guy doesn't want it. maybe the wimps will like this, but I can't imagine why.
Slower and more teasing would have been great. A very hot read. Im dripping pre cum but left wanting more teasing.
@First Anonymous
Fair enough. I'd say the plot is about as long as it needed to be, this being a story of a quick nonconsensual encounter, but yeah, I definitely could've added more details to it.
@Wildbill314
No problem, we all like what we like. Thank you for the compliment.
@Second Anonymous
She's sure that he'll be back for the same reason why she's so confident in the first place. She's a very attractive woman, exactly his type, who just gave him one of his best sexual experiences he had had in a long time, and she can clearly see that on him. Also, no, the key's just for the cuffs.
@Third Anonymous
Can't completely disagree with that opinion, and thanks for the rating.
@Fourth Anonymous
I'm glad that you liked the story, and honestly, I wouldn't really say that everyone's hating it, I honestly expected a lot more negative reception when seeing the rating.
@Fifth Anonymous
Well, as I already said, we all like what we like and we all have our own fetishes, which is why I specifically mentioned in the Author's Notes that this is a nonconsensual femdom story.
@Sixth Anonymous
Thanks! Fair point, since more people have mentioned that as well I'll definitely remember that when writing in the future, and I'm happy that you've enjoyed the story.
Real cheap, and disrespectful to rape victims (regardless of gender). Plus, shit jokes.
A little rushed. And makes no sense; why start off as a comedian and then suddenly be a rapist?!
@First Anonymous
Damn, completely forgot to reply to this comment. Well, you might think that it's disrespectful, but, well, this is an NC/R story, so, well... it has non-consent in it :D, what else can I say.
Though I will admit that the jokes are far less than perfect.
@Second Anonymous
Yeah, this is one of the stories where I was trying to write it as quickly as possible. When you don't have much time for writing, you have to write fast.
As for the second sentence, well, there's absolutely nothing weird about someone being a good and funny person in public and a monster in their private one. Lots of such examples in the real world as well, actually.