All Comments on 'Her Secret Fantasies Pt. 01'

Yes, the chapter ends in wild, uncontrolled sex, but unlike your other pieces the characters, while believable, are 2-dimensional. “Work Out” and “My Lesbian Lust”, for example, are almost mesmerizing in mysterious/romantic way and the wild sex wonderfully erotic — all achieved in a shorter space. Just saying. Maybe being a near hopeless romantic colors my views or maybe the storyline gels as this is only the first chapter. Like your work; hope you keep sharing your vivid imagination.

I hope you right more or this story