All Comments on 'Heretic Ch. 03'

I read this chapter earlier today, but wanted/needed time to process. I went back to chapter one to regain the full impact. You created a tale that captured my attention from page one - I could not stop thinking about/visualizing what I was reading. Aside from the bizarrely thought provoking storyline, the characters you develop are truly memorable, which is so true in all your tales (Adwen, Riona, Rhoda, Maelice, Anktha, Rochelle), and your descriptions of highly erotic sex scenes and scenes of violence truly immersive. You write so creatively out of a wildly wicked imagination; please continue to share.

Excellent tale with a nice surprising twist for the ending. It is the stories like these that attempt to at least shine a small light on the hypocrisy and lies that organized religion seems to always be built upon. It always comes back to power and wealth which is another type of power. I appreciate stories such as these since they are well thought out and show that there is people still have faith even without religion and that belief in yourself and others is where you need to start building that faith from the ground up. Thanks for all the time and effort you put into these chapters.

J.D.

Is there going to be any sequels? Maelice is such an interesting character!

Took me a bit to work out the last sentence. Very tasty once I did. Great series.