All Comments on 'Highland Heaven Pt. 02'

I love it. This is full of your love and your big heart is so in evidence. You also have your own unique and attractive voice. It’s like you, a joy xxxxx

A lovely progression of the story. It’s such a refreshing change to enjoy the ‘love’ amongst the sex on here. Looking forward to part three June.

Just a beautiful story being told. Thank you for sharing June!

Thank you my dearest Pix, without your help and love I could not have achieved this.

Dear Cleeve

You are an inspired writer and any comment from such a talent has to be taken seriously…Thank you for being so generous in your words. I hope you like Part 3 just as equally.

...I'll get my quibble out of the way first. In my earlier comment I mentioned the use of upper case letters where they were unnecessary. There are several in this chapter, two examples being "the Eagle" and "the Guesthouse". The only language I know which would use upper case for these words is German. Upper case should be used for proper nouns and at the start of sentences. Please accept that I'm not knocking you, June. I am trying to be helpful and wish to encourage because I think that so far, you have shown that you can write very well and are showing the potential to be a valuable contributor to Literotica. It's because your writing is so good that even minor errors leap off the page. I can only add that I'm looking forward to reading more work from you.

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There is something so compelling about this straightforward ode to June's and Pixie love. It reads like an entry from their kinky voyeuristic guardian angel's diary; And we as readers are made privy to their most intimate moments. There are undoubtably elements of the ladies' real lives included in the narrative,; but how much it is fantasy???- That is a fun little question to ponder long after finishing reading this special work of "Lit" erotica. Also: Congratulations on your engagement ladies. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

Thanks Sexxyboi….glad you are enjoying them

Dear Maonaigh,

I thank you for your comments…although feel I’m back in my English class at school. I never learnt anything there either..but I did dream, which I hope is in my writing. I’m sorry if the mistakes offend you please just pass over them and enjoy the text.

Part 3 and finale is out soon….I wait in anticipation of another scalding ! 😉😉

June

Hi Anonymous

Thank you..I hope my writing, and I’m very new at this, is enjoyed by many. Pixie has encouraged me to express how I feel some fiction and some elements of reality as you have detected.

Please enjoy and thanks again

The love that imbues this story is what makes it so good. Congratulations on your engagement.

Just when I thought it couldn’t get any better, you have enlightened me. In a lot of the stories sex is out front. In this their love drives the story and the sex is as natural as breathing. When June sang for Pix, I thought this was going somewhere. Pix’s proposal was perfect. What a way to end a story.

Please, let’s have more. I’m a hopeless romantic and these kind of stories are wonderful to read.

Thank you NoLongerAnon, I very much appreciate your comments and congratulations

Fandeboris, You are too kind…thank you.

This is what love looks like…including the physical intimacy.

You have a very fresh and natural writing style that draws the reader intimately into your emotions.

Wonderful, June. I love the play between you and Pix, the gentle teasing and the obviously deep and abiding love. Keep up the wonderfully creative work. Now on to part 3!

Anna

xxx

Thanks so much again Paul

I am touched to know that you are enjoying my writing

Thank you dearest Anna..enjoy the end

Just wonderful, romantic, sexy and fun 🤩

Aoife, your kind words are so encouraging. Thank you

I usually prefer my erotica to contain out-and-out kink and perversion. This romance tale is beautiful: well written and incredibly erotic. I love it! Another 5 stars, June.

Olsen, you are very kind. thank you

One of the things I adore about June's writing is that the love shines through. As you say, Olwen, kink and perversion are always to be had - of varying quality (high quality in your own case), but what June manages to do, as the new series will confirm, is to catch the love element which can make sex so much more fun xxxxx

Olwen, again I am sorry for the typo in your name.

"The thought of doing a Gay Gordon's or Dashing White Sergeant appealed to Pix." Being French-Canadian, I must say I hadn't the slightest idea what you were referring to. And when I don't know what it is, I am always curious enough to find out: scottish dances. Thank you for teaching me ! I've been reading your stories via Pixiehoff. From what I read and the ones from Pixie, both of you have a wonderful relationship. As a matter of fact, I will definitely pour myself a glass of wine for a toast to both of you. As far as your writing is concerned, I know you are just starting and you're heading in the right direction. I read erotic stories on Literotica, and elsewhere, to be pleasantly entertained. Your stories reflect passion, love and joy. That's why I beleive you will be a winner among other authors.

Waffle, you obviously enjoy reading on literotica, the fact that you have found my stories and enjoyed them is truly amazing. Thank you.

What a beautiful continuation! I hope to Hannah drawn more into the narrative...

So pleased you enjoyed it Sarah

Here swings a soul for another one …. Thats a lovely read in such stormy times …… you’re as talented as Lady Pixiehoff and im happy, to being lucky that i can reading your tales now

And for talents like June and her voice, or like you and Pix with writing, out there are so many talented girls or boys but the connections for a grand entry are not given

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🍀💋

Many thank Franz

If only we all could find such love. Thank you for this glimpse.

Thank you Nerdy, I am so pleased you enjoyed it