by JPintraining
A wonderful conclusion to a triumphant trilogy, my darling. I am so proud of you. You write with passion and love, and both are such a part of you, and are why I love you. Don’t stop at this though, you have a gift xxxxx
A lovely conclusion to the series. I’ve told you that you have a talent and this story comes from personal knowledge and experience, always the best way when starting out. Now comes the difficult bit, the follow up, but I know it will be brilliant. Take your time and use Pixie’s advice. Well done!
Thank you my darling Pix, your inspiration has taken me down a path I didn’t know existed.
How long I can go on writing is only thanks to the support I get from the ones who care and love.
You are an amazing support..
Love you forever
June 💋
Dear Cleeve,
We never spoke til about a week ago…but now I just cherish your support in my writing. I don’t think I have a gift or talent any more than anyone else….just dreams and life as it is, on paper.
I hope to write more and there is something in the early stages.
Thank you again
June.
Well done, June, you've written a lovely story with a perfect ending. I only wish that all anti-gay bigots could be won over as skilfully as Pix won Big John over. I must admit, though, to a head-shaking little smile at the idiots who think being gay is contagious. Heartiest congratulations on your marriage---may it be long and happy, and if your love can change even a small handful of bigots it will all be worthwhile. June, writing is like any other craft, you have to keep working at it (I've been writing since Noah threw the unicorns off the ark and still think I could improve). You have shown that you've got it, so don't stop there. Keep working at it and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the not-too-distant future.
(A small thing I meant to mention in my Chapter Two comment and forgot. My late wife and I both thought that Dolly Parton's version of I Will Always Love You was superior to Whitney's.)
So much to like and enjoy about your first piece (series); the shared love so easily felt.
Thank you Maonaigh, if I can follow this success, it will be a miracle, but I’ll try.
An excellent trilogy to launch your writing career on Literotica!
Please continue to write.
And congratulations upon your marriage!
.
JPinT proves the axiom, that when it comes to gifts, its the thought that counts. The thought / effort put into this gift of a story make it priceless. As long as this budding author remembers who she is writing for (and why), I feel there is no reason she can't follow up this wonderful debut with an equally enjoyable second offering. - I look forward to it. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿
June - Thank you for sharing your wonderful story of love and the courage to live freely
Well done, June. A lovely ending. I am impressed. You've clearly developed your writing skills as you wrote this series. Five stars well earned.
Anna
xxx
I am so proud of you, darling. I was happy to help with the proof-reading, but want everyone to know that these are your triumph, my love xxxxx
Paul, Thank you twice over.
I’ll hope to continue to write so watch out for another trilogy.
Pixie, as my boss says, you are only as good as those that work with you…..thank you
That goes for sex too..giggles
I waited till the story was complete to comment. It was sweet and gentle and very erotic. I am sure that, especially with Pixie's gentle guidance, a future on Lit and will be a wonderful addition as an author.
I just finished the Trilogy of lovely stories set in an idyllic setting in a quaint village. Two gay lovers having a passionate getaway weekend together. Enjoying themselves and meeting the locals. I especially liked how they met a young woman and helped her in making her parents aware of her true feelings for another another woman. This is must reading and enjoy.
SerradaC, your comments are truly most kind, thank you….with Pixie in charge the world is at my feet 😉
Dearest Gerri, what can I say ? you are truly a good friend to say such nice words… thank you 💋
Well now I know that 'Romance' has a justified place here in Literotica. I've been thrilled by this serial, and by the fact that you and Pixie did eventually indulge in some spanking and watersports. (Both favourites of mine, btw!)
Now then June, no dawdling. Get on with your chapters of The Lady & the Orphan please. I hope the 5 stars I've given you for this chapter is an incentive to get your creative juices (and any other juices you may have!) flowing.
Dear Olwen, thank you once more and please be patient..they are on their way 😉
Thank you, Olwen. June has cracked on in record time and both parts have been submitted xxxxx
Absolutely 5 🌟 fantastic true love, it shows! made friends in Scotland as well . Must admit it made me hot.
Keep the love burning xx
I don't know how I missed this when it was originally published, I am sorry. Since the two main characters were two people "head over heels in love", the only place to write this is from the heart.
My heart went out to Hannah. But I am glad the disdain from her father was eliminated.
Thank you for an excellent series.
Take care.
Thank you Fandeboris, it’s been a while since I wrote the series but it was as you say written from the heart.
I hope to perhaps continue in the future.
June
If so happened that would be the most perfect sweetest party ever …… Mmmmmh so heart warming ….. thank you for sharing this lovely piece of art
💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🍀💋
It is amazing how love is at its core exceedingly simple but the most powerful force. We are formed by its presence or absence in our lives. This was a delightful look at the strength held within this immeasurable entity.
Thank you agin Nerdy for your comments..this story was my first attempt at writing and I was amazed by the wonderful reactions