by Luckie_Duckie
Enjoying the story you've crafted for us, but if there's any way you could wait until you've written a couple of chapters and post them as one it would flow so much better- I know it must seem like a lot of words when you write it but feels like just little glimpses when we read it.
Looking forward to seeing how the two ages meet happily :)
Glad you decided to add more to the story. Hope you continue. I was reading the recent comments and I have to agree that if you posted a couple of chapters as one it would flow better. Keep up the good work!!
She is 27 and from modern times. It seems implausible that she is a virgin. I don't see why writers seem to feel it is so important that every heroine be a virgin.
I also agree that the chapters are ridiculously short. The story is entertaining though and I am curious to see how it is resolved. Thanks for sharing.