All Comments on 'Highland Magic Ch. 28'

by Luckie_Duckie

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kiwiplumkiwiplumover 13 years ago
I know they all say it but...

Enjoying the story you've crafted for us, but if there's any way you could wait until you've written a couple of chapters and post them as one it would flow so much better- I know it must seem like a lot of words when you write it but feels like just little glimpses when we read it.

Looking forward to seeing how the two ages meet happily :)

Irish_IndianIrish_Indianover 13 years ago

Glad you decided to add more to the story. Hope you continue. I was reading the recent comments and I have to agree that if you posted a couple of chapters as one it would flow better. Keep up the good work!!

BiotechGirlBiotechGirlalmost 8 years ago
Virgin?

She is 27 and from modern times. It seems implausible that she is a virgin. I don't see why writers seem to feel it is so important that every heroine be a virgin.

I also agree that the chapters are ridiculously short. The story is entertaining though and I am curious to see how it is resolved. Thanks for sharing.

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