by Luckie_Duckie
She is 27 and from modern times. It seems implausible that she is a virgin. I don't see why writers seem to feel it is so important that every heroine be a virgin.
I also agree that the chapters are ridiculously short. The story is entertaining though and I am curious to see how it is resolved. Thanks for sharing.
Glad you decided to add more to the story. Hope you continue. I was reading the recent comments and I have to agree that if you posted a couple of chapters as one it would flow better. Keep up the good work!!
Enjoying the story you've crafted for us, but if there's any way you could wait until you've written a couple of chapters and post them as one it would flow so much better- I know it must seem like a lot of words when you write it but feels like just little glimpses when we read it.
Looking forward to seeing how the two ages meet happily :)