All Comments on 'Hiking Partner Swap Ch. 01'

The old positive spin, eh?

I’m sure a lot of readers won’t like this story, but I did. Two couples, a bit sexually mismatched, and they manage to make things work without rancor or divorce.

Of course everything stayed the same... Really?

The Twin Towers seemed pretty solid also, so your marriage is still in jeopardy.

The warmup for the inevitable divorce, after one or both of them can't put the genie back in the bottle. Sad.

Very erotic and well-written. No turn-downs, humiliations, or disrespects. Just nice, heterosexual, and consensual adult fun on a temporary basis. The kind of fun any couple would enjoy for sexual variety if they are open minded. No love, recriminations or wrong expectations. A really awesome swapping story. Thanks for the story, the effort and the time to write it.

I still wonder what Val and Mike did...

Well told. Thanks you.

A very well thought out and executed story. Did you catch that all you morons? I said STORY. And what does that mean? I means it will NOT end in divorce like you idiots suggest. It means it ends exactly how the author intended it to end. And quite well I might add.

Excellent! Your story is completely believable. I sent the link to my husband who is at the gym, and he will soon be home to find me naked in our bed. We both have a craving for some"strange," and it would be wonderful to have it happen as you described. 5*s.

ROFLMFAO

Really?

You left so much out. TO the point that you have no idea what I even mean.

Seems like Brad took her dress off twice, might want to edit that.

OK, sure, why not? Might as well bring in Santa Claus and the Easter Bunny, and in between fucking have them win millions of dollars at Roulette. I mean, its possible, right? About as interesting as a story about people who chain smoke and never get sick, much less lung cancer.

Find your worse enemy, and convince them to try this with their marriage.

Thanks for the effort.

LOL. got to love the comments, especially those that are outraged because somebody else had a different opinion of this story. Personally, swapping= willing cuckoldry= garbage=one star. That's my opinion. Tough shit if you don't like it.

Since this was told entirely from from the point of view from Mike's wife (did we actually know her name?) And given that there was almost no dialog between the characters we have no idea if Mike and Valerie actually gave consent to a sexual swap. Mike's wife unilaterally made the decision to go off with Brad without input from either Mike or Valerie. Its obvious that Mike and his wife are a miss matched couple and don't have much in common. Mike's wife doesn't think much of Mike and his bedroom skills and are sexually mismatched. She obviously has a high opinion of her self. Was highly critical of Valerie's appearance commenting to herself she was borderline fat. I got the impression she didn't think much of Mike's body. Considering all that we wonder why the fuck they're still married and a couple. She arrogantly thinks they have a strong marriage but we're given no evidence from Mike that's the case.

Nice little sexy story. The comments by puritanical loons are also entertaining. Do you think they know this is an erotic story site?

What's the hell is the matter with you haters? It was a good enough story. Stop being so closed minded that you can't believe a couple, with a close marriage, and is entirely honest with each other, can't let loose every now and then without damaging their relationship.

I do not understand the low score on this one - 5 stars, easily.

I loved your story. Both willing to try something both wanted.

I love the outrage of the cucks. They can't stand it that somebody actually may have a different opinion than theirs. Whiny little bastards. Got to love the commands. LOL

So how did Mike and Val spend their night? How does it make sense to talk about being fully transparent when there is no clarity whether only 2, or all 4, of the characters are engaging in extramarital sex over the next ten years?

If only real life was that simple!

Really, the occasional sanctioned partner swap may not be a bad idea.

With today's high divorce rate, it can't mess things up more than they already are.

This type of story always ends with controversy in the comment section , the more detailed and well written the story the more controversy is inspired , and this particular story is no exception to that rule ! I want to thank the author for this contribution , though that type of lifestyle isn’t in my future as I don’t find it desirable , I am not against others living any way they so choose as long as they are all okay with it . I like to expand my horizons by engaging stories outside my normal parameters , the feelings that are invoked in me by these stories can be intense as I imagine myself , and/or my wife and I , in that situation . Comparing my feelings with those of the characters can be interesting , sometimes in a similar vein but oftentimes juxtaposed , it stimulates some part of me either by being physically aroused or by being appalled , either way it’s stimulating ! The better story and the greater the author is at conveying the feelings of his characters at key intervals , the more I’m stimulated ! Thank you dear author , I hope to see this story elaborated on in another chapter or two !

I love this story. It reminds me of a relationship I and my wife had for a long while. I am saving this as one of my favorite stories.

What a nice story. Original. Entertaining. Most of us can only wish we had a similar experience. Great job.

Ed

Great story....

I have known couples like that, one extroverted, the other less so.

I'll also give you credit for the funniest line on the site...

"Brad dislikes equestrian facilities..."

Who thinks or talks like that?

Well done!