by humbelle
I am beginning to become a fan of your work. I love playing WoW, so I like the backdrop. Keep on writing. Luvin' the storyline.
Indeed, I liked it too. Nice blend of humor, action, and sensuality. Having played through that zone many times I liked the backdrop. I couldn't get too involved with the story though. Because of the mechanics of WoW, each races' males and females look roughly like all the rest. To really distinguish individuals apart it's the personality and history that's important. That didn't come through. Both characters were rather underdeveloped. Good work nonetheless. Oh a humorous note, during their second session the idea popped into my mind of Tristan shape shifting into Bear form again while pounding her from behind lol.