All Comments on 'His Ch. 02'

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Winter_FareWinter_Fareover 2 years ago

Such a magnificent connection they have. It's so intense. I love all the details and it's so refreshing to read a scene that gets inside the heads of both D and s without making either one a caricature.

swiftlytiltingswiftlytiltingover 2 years ago

Fuck... Oh, god, fuck...!! *sigh* So wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Mayday,

Fuck sakes! Trying to read this with my morning coffee before I head to work! Thanks for that! Not sure I will be able to see straight, much less walk straight.

You certainly out did yourself in this masterpiece! Jesus, so well done!

Congratulations on such an artfully written epic story. I am blown away by you.

E

Paul4playPaul4playabout 2 years ago

Wow! Oh, wow!

Steamy hot erotic passion and intensity!

Excellent writing and build up of sexual tension…desire…need…completion!

Phew…thank you.., I needed that!

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