All Comments on 'His Dreamgirl's Drinking Problem'

I always loved stories like this. Keep up the good work!

this was way more in line with the stories you are continuing and it was amazing!! Hope you continue this theme with future stories.

awesome work!

It is better than kmaf's story, just go through the story once before posting as there were some grammatical errors.

But it was a great read.

Very good story, I would say that this one is written very similarly to some of your others so it doesn't really stand out. Just something to watch out for.

I never thought I'd say this: it's better than KMAF's original story!

Excellent job! That was one of the absolute hottest reads I've ever had the pleasure of working through. I love the direction you're going with it! The degradation she feels and struggles with because he is so opposite of her in every way is so insanely erotic. These stories of young, gorgeous women giving themselves to these utterly hideous, filthy, old men is everything I want in a story. I eagerly await the next chapter! I'm thrilled to see someone pick up where Kmaf left off, and to do it so skillfully. Please keep this story going!

Im your fan from israel :-)

I never thought I'd say this: it's better than KMAF's original story!

I second this statement. Please post the sequel soon. Maybe Kim will have sex with him in her cheerleader outfit at her high-school. Maybe Kim will do him as the prom-queen. Do explore more on the daddy kink. lots and lots of scope here. Do not abandon this story!

My God that was one of the dirtiest and horniest stories I've ever read, thank you so much, please let there be more!

incredible, incredible stuff! thank you so much for writing. so fucking hot.

This story not having a sequel will be crime

Please add more to this story!!! it was fantastic.

Where is part one of this ?

Look for "Taking His Dream Girl" by KMAF. That's part one,

Brilliant sequel to the 1st which was written too long ago! Thank you

I'm speechless. No words. Please, more... swallowing his cum, taking her anal cherry with lots of lube and time to enjoy, and everything else you can think about.

Are you planning on making your own version of the first Dreamgirl?

Great!