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by abadgirl

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Kitty_SenpaiKitty_Senpaialmost 17 years ago
points taken away for leaving me wanting more!

i'm in love with ur writing ... even tho i think you could have divided your paragraphs neater... but its well writen non the less...

i take 25 points for not putting in part 2 immediately :)

hurry and finish it i like this guy (give him an identity i can relate to, u know features ... i know she's an average red head ... btu whats he?)

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