All Comments on 'His Pet'

by DesertMutt

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KwingKwingalmost 14 years ago
Kind of Boring

Little detail goes into each section of the story, and I feel like the progression of kissing, clothing removal, fondling, and intercourse were sped up largely. I understand that this might be fitting in a D/s relationship, but aside from the collar, not much was done to establish this as a BDSM story. Overall the sensations were described rather poorly.

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